Demona #5:
I'm just gonna do it chain of thought style this time.
[SPOILER] I never really thought about how it's kind of confusing to have the Gargoyles narration at the opening of this Demona series. Obviously it's iconic, but none of the information in it's relevant to the Demona stories.
The wind ceremony's really nice, but I find myself irrationally irritated by the fact that Greg has used the word "thus" 8,883,212 times (I counted but I may be off by a couple of million) since Here in Manhattan #1.
I feel like I'm missing a setup line for Demona's "Then Share his Fate".
I'm finding myself really emotional over this story. I really have dug the relationship between Anjelika and Demona, I think the small cast has really grown this relationship and I really buy into the idea of them as mother and daughter, and that Demona cares about her.
What... I don't dig so much is Demona's explosive "I blame the humans for this". I know that's her whole thing, but in this case it doesn't feel very... earned? Not that prejudice is ever rational, but I dunno. I feel like the moment called for something more somber, more self-pitying. Like "the Hunter denies me even my own grief" something quiet and thoughtful like that. Like we all know she gets back to that violent, torturous state, but I don't think she's there in this story.
It's a quibble, but I don't think it's a small one.
It also... really contextualizes Demona's 1000 years and her character in other ways. I'm sure in the 800 years after that, she shored herself up enough to try to get close to someone and just watched them die again too. I'm sure part of the reason she betrayed Goliath and the clan, is even if he didn't turn on her for how monstrous she's become, she'd eventually have to watch him waste away too. I'm sure that was in the back of her mind.
I don't think the main book has really given us much Katana ultimately. She's kind of the straight man to Brooklyn often, she plans mother hend in the Nashville story, but we haven't gotten a lot of story on her in her own terms. I felt like we got some more characterization here. A lot more focus. It was cool. [/SPOILER]
Alex (Aldrius)
posted @ Sat, Dec 20, 2025 11:18:04 pm EST from 70.27.161.43
