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RAIN OF THE GHOSTS, BOOK ONE UPDATE, Chapters Ten - Twelve
In my on-going shameless attempt to maintain buzz about my new novel, RAIN OF THE GHOSTS, due out in stores and on-line on December 3rd, 2013 (but available for pre-order NOW on Amazon, etc.), I'm updating you on my progress proofreading the proofs of the book. (Yes, it's ridiculous, but I did use the word 'shameless' now, didn't I?)
This is a painstaking process. I'm going through each chapter sentence by sentence, trying to be careful with each word, each punctuation point.
Tonight, I finished proofing Chapters Ten through Twelve.
Here are all the changes I've indicated in these three chapters:
In first partial paragraph, change "forties" to "fifties".
In second full paragraph, add "own" to "At the picture in her own hand."
Also in second full paragraph, the entire end of the paragraph from "N.T.Z." on, should be in italics.
In first partial paragraph, change "mother" to "mom".
In fifth full paragraph, remove quotation marks around "icky-face."
In first partial paragraph, added comma between "…air, and we…"
Admit it. You're intrigued.